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List of outstanding concerns rasied on FAC 2 and preliminary findings :
- "The letter requested monetary compensation for downloads of the company's licensed material." Ambigious again. The downloads they'd already been recorded as having made, or future downloads? (T1)
- "The company initially believed that, unlike other countries, a mere warning letter would not stop the downloads." Other countries versus a warning letter? False contrast. (T1)
- Remove comma after "individual", since there are no other "and"s in the sentence, and it's not too long. Add "two" before "factors", for clarity. (T1)
- After sufficient[clarification needed] downloading activity had been recorded by BayTSP, Odex sent letters of demand to people associated with the IP addresses it had tracked. (SK)
- An Odex representative said[when?] it intended to obtain search warrants for illegally downloaded anime, if necessary. (SK)
- There was speculation[attribution needed] that the company would collect approximately S$15 million from 3,000 individuals through out-of-court settlements, but Odex responded that it did not require each of them to pay a uniform S$5,000. (SK)
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- The main factors it considered when deciding the level of compensation to demand were the amount of downloading by each individual, and the need to keep the amount levied to a minimum at the initial stage of enforcement.[clarification needed] (SK)
- Mailer Diablo 17:58, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
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