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Due to 14-day debarment from Peer Review after the FAC, peer review shall be conducted below tentatively.

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List of outstanding concerns rasied on FAC 2 and preliminary findings :

  1. "The letter requested monetary compensation for downloads of the company's licensed material." Ambigious again. The downloads they'd already been recorded as having made, or future downloads? (T1)
  2. "The company initially believed that, unlike other countries, a mere warning letter would not stop the downloads." Other countries versus a warning letter? False contrast. (T1)
  3. Remove comma after "individual", since there are no other "and"s in the sentence, and it's not too long. Add "two" before "factors", for clarity. (T1)
  4. After sufficient[clarification needed] downloading activity had been recorded by BayTSP, Odex sent letters of demand to people associated with the IP addresses it had tracked. (SK)
  5. An Odex representative said[when?] it intended to obtain search warrants for illegally downloaded anime, if necessary. (SK)
  6. There was speculation[attribution needed] that the company would collect approximately S$15 million from 3,000 individuals through out-of-court settlements, but Odex responded that it did not require each of them to pay a uniform S$5,000. (SK)
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  7. The main factors it considered when deciding the level of compensation to demand were the amount of downloading by each individual, and the need to keep the amount levied to a minimum at the initial stage of enforcement.[clarification needed] (SK)

- Mailer Diablo 17:58, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

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